My review on your teaching to my daughter.
1 Content and Argument
The text answers the central question(s) posed by the assignment & Sufficient space (or words) have been given to the most important points.
All the information included is relevant to the question set &The mainline of argument/thesis is clear.
2 Research Material
There are sufficient examples and evidence to support/illustrate your points & A range of cited references are included
3 Structure and organisation
The text is in the appropriate structure/format for the type of assignment, The ideas/points are clearly linked.
Ideas are presented in a logical order & It is clear how each paragraph links to the paragraphs before and after.
The style is appropriate for the course and the text is scientific and clear. The text is free of slang and colloquialisms & Technical terms are used appropriately. The text is to the point, with no repetition
The text can be easily read out aloud
There is nothing that a reader will find confusing & the language is clear and straightforward
It is clear which sentence in your introduction summarizes your argument/approach
Sentences are of reasonable length and are uncomplicated
The introduction is clear and appropriate. Conclusion provides a clear synthesis of the argument
Spelling, grammar and punctuation have been checked and are correct.References are correctly used and cited.